Critique & Editing services for Children's Writers

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RACHELLE'S PUBLICATIONS

TREE HOUSE IN A STORM: (Children's Fiction Book, Stemmer House Publishers, 2009)
Blind Ambition (nonfiction, Highlights Magazine, Jan. 2009). AWARDED "AUTHOR OF THE MONTH" by Highlights for this story.
Blind Ambition (nonfiction, Educational Testing Service. Originally published in Highlights magazine)
The Holiday House (fiction, Highlights Magazine-TBA)
The Victory Coop (fiction, Highlights Magazine-TBA)
The Ski's No Limit (nonfiction, Scholastic Scope, Jan. 2008)
Mismatched Socks (poem, Pockets Magazine, Jan/Feb 2008)
Why Does Skin Get Wrinkly in Water? (nonfiction, "Ask Science World." Scholastic Science World, May 2011)
The Come Back (fiction, Catholic Forester Mag., Spring 2008)
From the Inside Out (Nonfiction science/nature, Birds and Blooms Mag., Sept. 2006)
To Catch a Fairy (poem, Dragonfly Spirit e-zine, Sept. 2005)
Michael's Dance (poem, Itty-Bits of Bliss poetry anthology, 2006)
Not So Little (poem, InspiredMoms e-zine) 2006
The Write Stuff (Writer and editor of monthly column: Kidsville News/Middlesex)

What her clients say:

"I am thrilled with your mentorship! Truly a blessing that I found you!" ~ Janis, Colorado
" I keep reading your critique over and over to study it. This is exactly what I needed. You made excellent points and I have already started to fix things. Your insight is great and has made me think of things I never thought of because I lack experience. You're making me a better writer. I can't thank you enough. I will work to improve this and let you know if I have any questions. When I'm ready I will re-submit it to you for round 2." ~Justin, Philippines
"I would most definitely recommend Rachelle to anyone who is looking to get a children's picture book critiqued. Rachelle not only looked at my work objectively, but offers fantastic insight into what changes are required and why. All of her opinions are extremely valuable. At times when I did not agree and had other suggestions, I actually had to agree with her original suggestion as I could see why she was right! She treated my work as passionately as though it was her own. All in all Rachelle's efforts go beyond a critiquing service. I really feel as though I have met a true friend in the writing world, particularly when writing becomes lonely and frustrating. I will not be able to thank her enough!! Pepe Badesha, Middlesex, UK
"Rachelle's attention to detail, and her ability to honestly critique with encouraging words is priceless. She is extremely timely with her critiques and truly goes above and beyond what most critiquing services accomplish. I feel I have found a friend in the writing world because she not only critiques but also offers support and encouragement in the often times discouraging world of writing. She has helped me bring my manuscript to another level and I am forever grateful. I plan on using her services for all of my future manuscripts." ~Erin Nielsen, Fairport, NY
“Rachelle critiqued the first two chapters of my novel. I knew they needed work but was I unable to look at the content objectively. Rachelle not only picked up on all the things that I knew were issues, but suggested simple steps on how to deal with these points until they no longer seemed an insurmountable. Rachelle approached the project with such knowledge and depth that I would not hesitate in recommending her to anyone looking for an expert in this field.” ~ Diane Hall, U.K. (recommended onLinkedIn)
"Rachelle has helped me whip the first pages of my YA fiction manuscript into much stronger and cleaner shape. After working on my story for almost three years, I was much too close to it to notice mistakes and inconsistencies anymore. Her professional critique pointed out what I overlooked for the hundredth time, when I thought it was as perfect as it could possible be. Far from it! Her critique is encouraging and eye-opening, and remember, the first five pages make or break your chance of hooking the reader." ~ Uta Burke (no relation), E.Brunswick, NJ (recommended on LinkedIn)
"My manuscript is 100% better than it was before Rachelle critiqued it. Her attention to detail, ability to think outside the box, timeliness and gently honesty made improving my story a pleasure. I can't wait to hear her constructive suggestions for all my future manuscripts!" ~ Erin Northington, Korea (recommended on LinkedIn)
"I can highly recommend Rachelle for any editing project. She worked an absolute miracle on my children's picture book. I had been asked by an editor to revise my manuscript and send it back. I had done so myself but had doubts about it. That's when I went to Rachelle for her expertise. I could not be happier with the work she did for me." ~ Brian Humek, Ft.. Worth, TX (recommended on LinkedIn)
"One of the best investments I've ever made." ~ Raymond Wilder, Jamestown, KY
"Rachelle's editing skills have consistently provided the most in-depth and accurate analysis of writing I have ever seen. Her critiques are a laser guided sniper rifle with clear and concise explanations. Her comments will show you the most efficient path towards greatly improving your articles, stories and prose from raw concept to finished product." ~ David Granovsky, Philadelphia, PA (recommended on LinkedIn)
" When I first found Rachelle’s critiquing service online, I decided to give it a try based mainly on her fast turn around time. I am so grateful that I did. I got so much more than I imagined. Not only did she get back to me quickly, she provided a very thorough review. She pointed out the strong points and showed me what areas could be improved. She offered constructive criticism in a positive way. She knows what makes be a story stronger. Her suggestions helped tighten my picture book manuscript and helped the story flow so much better. Rachelle’s positive comments on what was working and thoughts on what could be improved helped me tremendously. This is my first manuscript and she was very caring and willing to guide me through the process. She really cared about the work I was doing and spent a lot of time thinking of ways to make it better. I could tell Rachelle really cared about making the story better. She has a passion for helping other writers create their best work. I owe her a million thanks! I will definitely be seeking Rachelle’s advice on future manuscripts." ~Amy Bowar-Raue, Harrisburg, SD
"Rachelle's professional critique and thorough suggestions were exactly what I needed for my manuscript. I am extremely pleased with the results." ~ Clare Salamida, Chappaqua, NY
"Rachelle will truly treat your project as if it is her own. Every time I worked with her I truly was amazed at the level of detail she brought to my project. She ferreted out things that I never in a million years would have thought of but made a difference in the final product. Her knowledge of the industry and her amazing talent at bringing out the very best in a MS makes her someone I plan to work with again and again." ~ Hugh Smith, Fords, NJ (recommended on LinkedIn)
"I was very pleased with her honesty and professionalism. Her suggestions and positive attitude truly helped us make the appropriate changes for the future success our book." ~ Cathy Hamernik., Jamesville, NY
"This is an excellent review. It’s what I was looking for! I am so excited!" ~ Yelitza Breen, Indianapolis, Ind.
"Rachelle is a very patient, kind and respectful person who truly cares about helping others in getting their writing done. She is always full of suggestions on how to better your writing. She gives it her all. She is very good and a bit picky at times for the good of the writer. I don't know what I would do without her. The lady is a second to sainthood. It is clear that writing and teaching writing is one of her many passions. I would recommend her to anyone who wants to write." ~ Debby Cantlon, Seattle, WA (recommended on LinkedIn)
"Your ideas and suggestions were so creative. So many times I said to myself "why didn't I think of that?" The reader can really envision what you are trying to convey with limited wording and it really helped to bring the story alive." ~ Wendy Maher, New Jersey

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RACHELLE'S PUBLICATIONS